Jumping Jim

The sketchiness of this piece detracts from the flow of the performance and should in future be altered to clean lines to make it clear and simple for the viewer to see. The actions of the character are precise and seem to specify the movement I wanted out of the character.

Although the emotion of the character is emphasized, more exaggerated actions would reflect this aspect of the character more. For instance, when 'Jim' is looking around to see if anyone is watching, his body language should 'search' more for others by extending the main body out sideways further and pushing him down more in the twist. This should make it obvious to the audience what is going on and effect them in consequence.